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张炜《声音》的阅读答案
声音
Tiwei
Cuigong Huayang Lai's Land Is Bright and Shining (Shi Liang Hangui) is a landscape with green fields, deep paths, and winding trails. The path led the people to wander, especially the girls. They told a story: "If I go deeper into the forest, it will make me sound higher." But the boys were not interested in going deeper; they just went forward.
Shi Liang Guan did her homework along with the girls when she was walking. The path was bright and full of light, reflecting like a long剑.
She moved forward as if she didn't see anything, but the girls didn't know about it. When the boys were tired, the girls just sat on a bench and let their voices escape.
"What's your voice?" she asked. The children were scared but still excited.
"Big kids, small kids! Big dogs, small dogs!" she shouted. The wind swirled, creating little ripples of sound that spread across the forest.
One boy said, "Oh my God! How beautiful is it to see the sounds in the forest?" She asked again and again. The children laughed and giggled.
She walked back home. On her way to find more trees, she heard a voice: "It's coming from far away. It’s coming from the east. There's a tree at the far end of the road." She turned her face up and looked down.
Now, the boys thought she was laughing. The sound seemed to be coming from all directions.
"Oh my God!" the children shouted.
Tiwei pointed out that this new voice was actually coming from very far away, even further than before. But when she looked back at her house, she felt a sense of peace and joy.
Despite being tired, the boys couldn't stop them from going forward. The wind carried their voices with it, creating ripples in the air that spread across the forest until it reached the edge.
Tiwei kept moving forward despite her exhaustion. When she reached another tree to find more trees, she stopped to listen again and heard more sounds.
She didn't know how far away the wind was going or if anyone would hear it.
"Oh my God!" one of the boys shouted.
She stopped walking back and looked up. The children had no idea what was happening. She said, "Who is it?" and they just laughed in her face.
She walked home, ignoring the wind until it reached her house. That night, she slept on the forest floor and felt a sense of peace that brought her back to her world.
"Big dogs, small dogs... Big kids, small kids!" she shouted again as she turned away. The children laughed and giggled.
One boy said, "Oh my God! How beautiful is it for the sounds in the forest?" She asked again and again. The children laughed and giggled.
She walked back home. On her way to find more trees, she heard a voice: "It's coming from far away." She looked at her house and said, "Oh my God!" and stopped walking.
Tiwei turned and looked up at the sky. She could see everything in front of her. The wind was going further away, but it was still in the same direction.
One boy ran ahead, saying, "This sounds like a big dog's bark." Tiwei laughed. They kept moving forward.
"Oh my God!" one of the boys shouted.
Tiwei walked to another tree to find more trees and looked back up at the sky. She said, "Who is it?" and they laughed in her face.
She stopped walking when she heard a different voice: "This sounds like a small dog's bark." They kept moving forward.
"Oh my God!" one of the boys shouted.
Tiwei turned to look up at the sky. She could see all the trees and everything around. The wind was still going further away, but it had reached her house.
She smiled. She said, "Oh my God! How beautiful is it for the sounds in the forest?" She asked again and again. The children laughed and giggled.
Tiwei walked back home to sleep on the forest floor. The wind was still going further away, but it had reached her house too.
She closed her eyes and let the air carry the sounds into her body until she fell asleep.
Now, she looked up at the sky. She could see all the trees in the forest and everything around. The wind was still going further away, even though it had reached her house.
She smiled again. She said, "Oh my God! How beautiful is it for the sounds in the forest?" She asked again and again.
Tiwei walked to another tree to find more trees and looked back up at the sky. She said, "Who is it?" and they laughed in her face.
She stopped walking when she heard a different voice: "This sounds like a big dog's bark." They kept moving forward.
"Oh my God!" one of the boys shouted.
Tiwei turned to look up at the sky. She could see all the trees in the forest and everything around. The wind was still going further away, but it had reached her house too.
She smiled again. She said, "Oh my God! How beautiful is it for the sounds in the forest?" She asked again and again.
Tiwei walked back home to sleep on the forest floor. The wind was still going further away, but it had reached her house too.
She closed her eyes and let the air carry the sounds into her body until she fell asleep.
Now, she looked up at the sky. She could see all the trees in the forest and everything around. The wind was still going further away, even though it had reached her house.
She smiled again. She said, "Oh my God! How beautiful is it for the sounds in the forest?" She asked again and again.
Tiwei walked back to her house. She turned and looked up at the sky. She could see all the trees in the forest and everything around. The wind was still going further away, even though it had reached her house too.
She smiled again. She said, "Oh my God! How beautiful is it for the sounds in the forest?" She asked again and again.
Tiwei walked back home to sleep on the forest floor. The wind was still going further away, but it had reached her house too.
She closed her eyes and let the air carry the sounds into her body until she fell asleep.
Now, she looked up at the sky. She could see all the trees in the forest and everything around. The wind was still going further away, even though it had reached her house too.
She smiled again. She said, "Oh my God! How beautiful is it for the sounds in the forest?" She asked again and again.
Tiwei walked back home to sleep on the forest floor. The wind was still going further away, but it had reached her house too.
She closed her eyes and let the air carry the sounds into her body until she fell asleep.
Now, she looked up at the sky. She could see all the trees in the forest and everything around. The wind was still going further away, even though it had reached her house too.
She smiled again. She said, "Oh my God! How beautiful is it for the sounds in the forest?" She asked again and again.
Tiwei walked back home to sleep on the forest floor. The wind was still going further away, but it had reached her house too.
She closed her eyes and let the air carry the sounds into her body until she fell asleep.
Now, she looked up at the sky. She could see all the trees in the forest and everything around. The wind is still going further away, even though it has reached her house.
Tiwei smiled again. She said, "Oh my God! How beautiful is it for the sounds in the forest?" She asked again and again.
参考答案：
- 第10题：分析二兰子常钻林中割牛草的原因。
- 第11题：分析二兰子的呼喊声“大刀睐……小刀睐……”的多重意蕴。
- 第12题：分析景物描写在小说中的多次出现，这样写有什么好处。
